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Wednesday, June 9, 2010

The Emerald Eyes-Chapter 1

The Emerald Eyes

Chapter 1-




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Characters: Sponge (Jane)Cheroes (Carlinn) , Manny (Charkie), Beaky(Juniper), Hanna, Dane(Denver), Samson(Jason), Max, Monkey(Paul), Ksaraa(Hope), Happlese(Phoenix), Scdawg(Amber), Snickersbat(Joey), Yokindred(Zach), Thefishbowl(Marley), Coolguy(Sam)

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"Get in the car!".

I toppled over Carlinn and Juniper as I tried to run to the R.V. first. Rain was pouring so hard on us I couldnt even see, and I smacked into the car's window. "Over here!". A hand reached out and grabbed me and pulled me into a door so fast I fell on the floor. "Stop falling", Juniper said as she grabbed 4 towels and snuggled in a corner. "Are you ok Jane?", Carlinn said, clearly concerned. "Does it look like it?", I said sarcastically. Blood was dripping down my head and parts of my hair were sticky because of blood. My hands had imprints of tiny rocks on them and there was dirt everywhere. Although Carlinn was perfectly fine. She wears a bathing suit everywhere, so she wasnt that cold. She's strange, JFYK (just for you to know). I walked over to a window and parted the curtains and pressed my face against it so that it would fog up. I could see the cave right in front of us a little. Carlinn came and kneeled on the couch to look out the window.

See, my dad is a miner. He's always traveling to big mines to get gold. One time in Arizona we hit the lottery. We found a secret entrence with a room full of 100 dollar bills and gold. It looked so ancient, because of the writings. I was there- I was 8 then. Now I'm 14. 6 years later, I guess. But now, my dad Charles Felcon got trapped in a mine and his boss said he had said that he was going to this mine. I honestly dont believe him. The boss's name is Nevell. He's always lying, but he promised me he would go to jail for lying about a big situation like this. For 5 hours we have been walking the long cave. It seemed to never end. Somehow, we could see the entrance from so far away but when we took another step the entrance dissapeared and the tunnel seemed to bend. Then we would see the entrance again, and then walk back. When we thought it was a trap door my dad had figured out and got into another part, it started to lightning, thunder,and rain all at once. So now we ran back, and we are in the R.V. This R.V. has a TomTom and it will drive by itself, which is wicked awesome. Now we have no reason to worry about the police.

Juniper's perfectly red hair (not ORANGE, RED) now looked ORANGE because of the rain. Her green eyes were scanning us, like she was looking for something. She got up and got some clothes from a bucket, and went to change in the closet. Juniper soon came out wearing a blue "Hollister" shirt, a necklace with 3 keys, white shorts, and her lucky bracelet that always saves us from danger. Carlinn (CAR-LYNN) stood near an empty yellow bucket. She took her purple elastic out of her hair and her bun fell apart, releasing all her black and purple hair. Carlinn took it all and squeesed it, tilting her head to side and letting the water fill in the bucket. I guess you could say I had normal hair. Dirty blonde. I had blue eyes, a brown sweater that said "YELLOWSTONE NATIONAL PARK" in 'dirty' pink (that covered my blue, green, teal, and white striped Aeropostale shirt), jeans, and Uggs that were now ruined. As I walked to the tiny dresser, I took my phone out of the "Gadget" droor by entering the family code, 88725463188. All compartments had codes. Juniper sat against the closet and said "Jane, call Zach". I rolled my eyes and said "Why!". She blushed while giggling and cooed "I miss him". Juniper is dating Zach Zyolynn. They are maddly in love. I've known Juniper forever, so I know that she will never pick him over me. But this is where it all went wrong.....
"Fine, I will", I muttered, punching the numbers regretfully. I didn't notice it, but Juniper was standing up rubbing her hands together. I also didnt notice her eyes changing from green to black.
"Hello?".
"Hey Zach. Juniper wanted me to...".
"Hold on Jane, tell Juniper that my keys are jingling".
I put the phone away from my ear and stared. Whatever.
"Zach wanted me to tell you that his keys are...".
Suddenly my phone grew as big as 3 iPads. Carlinn was about to faint. Then, my body turned green and ropes shot out of the cieling and tied me. I dropped the iPad and then Zach stepped out. Carlinn fell and fainted. Juniper's eyes had turned to black, and there was no pupil any more. She had fangs, and her ears were pointed back. "...jingling", Juniper finished, laughing evilishly. Zach had red eyes, and he had so much armor everywhere. Then he had a big black cape that fell to the floor. Juniper now had green hair that was on (blue) fire at the end (what is up with people with green and blue). Her skin was light green. Juniper had armor that 'faded' into a dress at the bottom (it was red). She wasnt barefoot anymore-she had long black boots that went up to her butt and you-know-what. They had grey buckles at the bottom that had a 'tatoo' on the side of a snake slithering around a swore with a J in the background. The iPad on the other hand turned into a person. It was as if this person was a ghost. He was all black. You could see nothing. It was just a black figure.
"Zach, you did well", it said.
"Thank you, Shadow Living. How about Juniper and her duty as a friend for 8 years?".
The Shadow Living turned to Juniper on the right. "Well done". The Shadow Living turned to dust, and then it was just me, the Fainted Carlinn, Juniper, and Zach. Zach hooked his arm around Juniper. Then he pointed to me, and sparks appeared. Then he was holding a staff.
"Die".

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